All About Me
My name is Nazella and i’m a student at PBS in Auckland. I am a Muslim so I speak Dari or Farsi. I will be talking about my family, my likes and dislikes and my country.
My family is very important in my life because there always their for me like every time I fall down. In my family I have 3 rough brothers and 2 beautiful sister that are not rough and I have my handsome dad and royal mom. When I need someone in my life my family cheers me up and I love my family.
I have many likes and dislikes so I am going to share half. My dislikes are snails, being embarrassed. My opposite of disgust are, holding babies, sleeping, being happy,being independent, typing/writing.
I have many amazing friends that are always happy and funny. I have two BEST FRIENDS and they are an important part of my life because they are always their for me when I fall or cry or fail or win or. My friends are sometimes family to me because they take care of me just like my mom or family. I am very grateful that I have friends. 
I love my family they’re terrific and always on time when I need them. I have many dislikes and my most thing that I don't like is falling down and being embarrassed. I love holding chubby cute babies. I have friends that are very important in my life because their just like family to me. I love my family and friends. I love my friends so much including my family and likes. 
This is an interesting piece of writing that has a lot of detail in it, Nazella. I also like that you have tried to wrap your text around the images to make your post look interesting.
ReplyDeleteNext time, if you get some suggestions from you buddy checkers or me, you should try to find other places where those suggestions could help. I showed you that your use of "disgust" was wrong and you changed one place you used it, but not the second place.
Thank you for your amazing feedback.
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