These past few weeks for writing we were focusing on the 'Magic Box poem' made by Kin Nisbett, our focus was description, we had to paint a picture in the reader's mind. We used powerful words to hook the audience in. We had to use verbs, and powerful adjectives.
What a fabulous poem Nazella! You have painted a very clear picture with your words. I really like the line 'The chocolate melting slowly in my hands, waiting to be eaten...' It makes me want to eat chocolate right now :)
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