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Showing posts with label Stretching sentences. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Stretching sentences. Show all posts

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

DRAFT with Zeba

Today for writing Zeba and I worked together to stretch a sentence and DRAFT that sentence with two other partners.
L.I: To write a stretched sentence.
L.I: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.
L.I: To write a stretched sentence.
L.I: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.

Who: The wolf.
What: The wolf howled.
When: at midnight, the wolf howled
Where: forest
Why: moonlight struck him
The wolf howled at midnight in the deeply illuminated forest, when the moonlight struck him.

At midnight, the wolf howled in the deeply illuminated forest, when the moonlight struck him.


At midnight, the wolf howled in the deeply illuminated forest, when the moonlight struck him.

The wolf howled in the deeply dark forest at midnight when the moonlight strucked him.



Friday, 12 February 2016

Stretching Sentences

           
This is my stretching sentence presentations. LI: Use who, what, when, where and why to make a sentence powerful and amazing. I learnt how to make an boring old sentence and transform, you could use this for writing. I worked with Sa Kae and made, "the boy ran" to a very interesting sentence.